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  帮我检查一下这几篇短文中有没有语法错误,拼写错误,意思不通等一(IwasborninTianjin.It’sinthenorthofChina.Therearenineriversthroughthecity.ThemostfamousriverisHaihe.It’sabeautifulriver.Youcantake

  帮我检查一下这几篇短文中有没有语法错误,拼写错误,意思不通等

  一(IwasborninTianjin.It’sinthenorthofChina.Therearenineriversthroughthecity.ThemostfamousriverisHaihe.It’sabeautifulriver.Youcantakeaboatalongtheriverandseethebeautifulview.PeopleinTianjinareveryfriendlyandkind.TianjinisfamousforFoodStreet.YoucantastelotsofdeliciousfoodintheFoodStreet.GuWenHuaJieisalsofamous.youcanbuyalotofthingsinthisstreet.WelcometoTianjin.Thereisalotofinterestingplacestovisit.)

  二(Thankyouforyouletter.NowI’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmid-autumnday.It’sonthe15thaugust.Everyyearwhentheholidaycomes.Wewillhaveonedayoff.Wewilleatmooncake.It’saverydeliciousfood.Wealsogououtforawalktoseetheroundmoonintheevening.Manyfamilywillgettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Wewillenjoyourselvesinthatday.It’sainterestingholiday.)

  三还有这篇(IwillspendmysummerholidayinBeijing.Itisthecapitalcityofchina.Therearealotoffamousandinterestingplaces.Themostfamousplaceisthegreatwall.Itisverybeautiful.Iwanttoclimbuptoitfirst.ThenIwillvisittheForbiddenCity.IalsowanttovisitBeiHaipark.IftheisclearIwillclimbuptobaitaandseethewholepark.

  Iwillstaytherefortwodays.Ithinkitwouldbeawonderfulholiday.)

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  Youcantakeaboatalongtheriver--takeboatalong

  Youcantastelotsofdeliciousfood--youcanenjoy更好

  Thereisalotofinterestingplacestovisit--thereare

  mid-autumnday...Mid-autumnFestival

  onthe15thaugust.应该是onthe15thdayoftheeighthlunarmonth

  It’saverydeliciousfood.--It’sverydelicious.

  gouout--goout

  inthatday.--onthatday

  ainterestingholiday--aninterestingholiday

2020-06-24 16:17:37
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