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  这是我写的自我介绍,希望大家帮我指点,改正错误.self-introductionHelloeveryone,mynameisxxx(不透漏名字了),myEnglishnameisSally.I'm12yearsold.Istudyinxxmiddleschool,Class10Grade1.Ihavemanyhob

  这是我写的自我介绍,希望大家帮我指点,改正错误.

  self-introduction

  Helloeveryone,mynameisxxx(不透漏名字了),myEnglishnameisSally.I'm12yearsold.Istudyinxxmiddleschool,Class10Grade1.

  Ihavemanyhobby,suchas,singing,drawingandridingbicyle.Inthefreetime,Ioftenreadbooks,listentomusicandplaycomputergames.

  Myfavouritesubjectisart,andI'mnotgoodatscience.Ihopeinthefuture,Icantokeepmyadvantages,andcorrecterrors.

  大家都说的很好,我都不知道要听谁的了。O(∩_∩)O哈哈~

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2020-06-1321:01
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  Istudyinxxmiddleschool,Class10,Grade1.

  这里漏了be动词,应该是Iamstudyinxxmiddleschool,Class10,Grade1.

  manyhobbies,many后面跟复数名词

  Myfavouritesubjectisart,andI'mnotgoodatscience.

  这一句在逻辑上有问题

  你可以说

  Myfavouritesubjectisarts,(继续拓展arts的内容)

  或者说

  Iamdoinggoodatart,butiamnotgoodatscience.

  Ihope,inthefuture,Icantokeepmyadvantages,andcorrecterrors.这里加一个逗号会好一些.

  逻辑上有些不严谨.

  初一的学生已经写得不错了..鼓励...

2020-06-13 21:04:47
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