【请问我的英语作文哪些地方还可以改的更好?辛苦您了!Nowadays,withthedevelopmentofsociety,peoplehavealotofpressures.Wheredoesthestresscomefrom?Whatshouldtheydotosolvetheseproblems?Parentsalwayswanttheirchild】
请问我的英语作文哪些地方还可以改的更好?辛苦您了!
Nowadays,withthedevelopmentofsociety,peoplehavealotofpressures.Wheredoesthestresscomefrom?Whatshouldtheydotosolvetheseproblems?
Parentsalwayswanttheirchildrentobethenumberone.Theyoffertheirchildrenvariousclasses.However,manychildrenhatemostoftheclass.What'smore,thechildrenlosetheirfreedom.Inmyopinion,parentsshouldgivetheirchildrenmorefreedom,letthemstudyindependentlyandmakethemdowhattheywanttodo.
Adultsalsohavepressure.Theyshouldcompetewiththeircolleagues.Itishardtogetappreciationfromtheirbosses.Theymusttrytheirbesttogetalongwellwiththeircustomers.Ithinktheyshouldhavemoretimetorelax.Andtheycanalsotalktotheirfriends,companionsandtheelderstosolvetheproblem.
Theelderhasretired.Itistimetoenjoythemselves.Howevertheyalsohavepressure.Theyhavenoincome.Whentheygetolder,theywillhavealotofhealthproblems.Andtheyoftenfeellonely.SoIsuggestthattheyoungcarefortheirparentsmoreandspendmoretimewiththem.
Thougheveryonehavemanypressure,itnotbadtousall,sometimesitwillmakeusstudyharder,workharderandcherishthechancewehave.Soweshouldtreatthepressurecorrectly.