【帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,顺便评一下分,AnunforgettabletripIhadanunforgettabletrip.IwenttoTheHappyVallywithmyfriendinsummervacation.Itonlytookusthirtyminutestoarrivetherebysubway.Weweresurp】
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Anunforgettabletrip
Ihadanunforgettabletrip.IwenttoTheHappyVallywithmyfriendinsummervacation.Itonlytookusthirtyminutestoarrivetherebysubway.Weweresurprised,becauseTheHappyVallywasveryhugeandthereweremanyinterestingthingsinit.SuchasRollerCoaster、BumperCar、PirateBoat.Soweplayedmanyevents.Afterthat,wewenttotherestaurantandatesomedeliciousfood.WestayedinTheHappyVallyforsixhoursandweleftthereat7p.m..Howgreatandunforgettablethetripis!