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　　帮忙修改英语短文WeallknowthatChinaisthemostpopulousdevelopingcountry,about1.3billionpeople,toomuchofthepopulationtotheurbanandruralareashasbroughtmanyproblems,forexample,inpoorruralareas,farmersdonothaveenou

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　　WeallknowthatChinaisthemostpopulousdevelopingcountry,about1.3billionpeople,toomuchofthepopulationtotheurbanandruralareashasbroughtmanyproblems,forexample,inpoorruralareas,farmersdonothaveenoughlandcultivation,andeventhepeopleinthoseareasdonothaveenoughfood,insomecities,manyyoungpeoplefindjobs.AndtherearealotofpollutioninChina.ThesuccessoftheChinesegovernmenttofindwaystosolvetheseproblems,itincreasesthepopulationandfamilyplan"afamily,aboy."RapiddevelopmentofChina'snationaleconomy,nationalstandardoflivinghasbeensignificantlyimproved.

　　是用现在完成时态,里边有错的么?急用,

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2020-06-1320:54

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　　ItisobviousthatChinaisthemostpopulousdevelopingcountrywithabout1.3billionpeople,whichhasbroughtmanyproblemstolifeinurbanandruralareassuchasfarmers'nothavingenoughland,residents'notgettingenoughfoodandopportunitiestohaveajob.Herecomesanotherbigproblem,pollution.TheChinesegovernmenthastakengreatmeasuresinsolvingtheproblems.Forexample,everyoneisfamiliarwiththepolicyof"Onefamily,onechild".ThankstotheRapiddevelopmentofChina'snationaleconomy,thestandardoflivinghasbeensignificantlyimproved.