帮忙批改一篇英语作文.指出错误LiMing'shometownhaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Inthepast.Theirlivingconditionswereverybad.Theylivedinasmalllowhouse.TheyhadnotTVtowatch.TheirworkingtoolswerefarmanimalsThe

　　帮忙批改一篇英语作文.指出错误

　　LiMing'shometownhaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.

　　Inthepast.Theirlivingconditionswereverybad.Theylivedinasmalllowhouse.TheyhadnotTVtowatch.TheirworkingtoolswerefarmanimalsTheirschoolconditionswerebad.Theystudiedinanoldschool.

　　Butnow.Theirlivinginatallbrightbuilding.TheycanplaycomputergamesandwatchTVintheirfreetimes.Theirworkingtoolsarefarmmachines.Theirarestudyinginamodernschool.

　　Inshort,alongwithchinesedevwlopment.Theirlifewillbemoreandmorebeautiful.