【雅思小作文批改题目是雅思4的test1的小作文,这篇作文怎么样,大概能得多少分啊,ThechartdemostratesthepercentageofdifferenttypesoffamilieslivingpoorinAustraliain1999.Accordingtothechart,thefamilyofagedco】

　　雅思小作文批改

　　题目是雅思4的test1的小作文,这篇作文怎么样,大概能得多少分啊,

　　ThechartdemostratesthepercentageofdifferenttypesoffamilieslivingpoorinAustraliain1999.

　　Accordingtothechart,thefamilyofagedcouple,accoutsleastpecentagearound4%.Whilethesingleagedfamilyandthecouplewhohavenotchildrenaresimiliar,roughly6%and7%.Allofthemarelowerthantheeverage--11%.However,thefamilyofsoleparent,havethehighestproportion,nearly21%.Andthefamilywhichissinglepersonwithoutchildrenisfollowed,about19%.Besides,thepovertyinthecouplewithchildrenaccouts12%---closingtotheeverage.

　　Atthesametime,itcanbeconcludedthatthepopulationofpoorvariesfromtypetotype.Forexample,thefamilywhichisagedcouple,hastheleastnumberabout48,000.

　　And54,000inthesingleagedpersonfamilyarelivingunderthestandard.Conversely,thefamilyofcouplewithchildren,hasanumrouesnumber,around933,000-about20timesoftheleastone.

　　Atlast,thefamilyofsoleparentismorelikelytobepoor.Butthefamilyofcouplewithchildrenarethegreatestnumber.