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  帮忙改一篇英语作文!急apersonwhohelpedmealotthereisaperson,whohelpedmealot.sheismymother.sheiskindandattentive.iloveherverymuch.onceihadifever.shelookedaftermenightandday.shemadedeliciousfoodforme,but

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  apersonwhohelpedmealot

  thereisaperson,whohelpedmealot.sheismymother.sheiskindandattentive.iloveherverymuch.onceihadifever.shelookedaftermenightandday.shemadedeliciousfoodforme,buthermealswasn'taswellasmine.ifshedidn'ttakecareofmesuchgreat,iwouldn'tgetwellsuchquickly.besidesthat,shesendsmetoschooleveryday.andshehastogetupearlytopreparebreakfast.istillremenberonething.lastterm,itoldherthatididn'tgetgoodgradesintheChinesetest.insteadofgettingangryonme,shesoothedme.(……)

  Allinallthen,shehelpedmealot.andshebroughtmehappinessandpower.

  括号内要加一句话……

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2020-06-1119:53
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  1.onceihadifever.shelookedaftermenightandday

  hadifever改为hadafever

  点号改为逗号

  nightandday改为dayandnight

  2.ifshedidn'ttakecareofmesuchgreat,iwouldn'tgetwellsuchquickly.

  这里应该是虚拟语气

  didn'ttake改为hadn'ttaken

  wouldn'tget改为wouldn'thavegot

  3.besidesthat

  应去掉that

  4.andshehastogetupearlytopreparebreakfast.

  这里and应该为so

  5.gettingangryonme

  angry改为anger

  on改为with

  6.最后一句时态应是一般现在时

  (shesaidthateverythingwouldgowellsoon.)

2020-06-11 19:55:14
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