【LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthem】

　　LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.

　　第一行：two-days改为two-day第二行：mountain前加a第三行：noon后加when第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting改为visited第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down第八行：and改为but第九行：去at