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　　请英文好的朋友帮助纠正一下英文作文的错误.Urbanisationledtoanincreaseinconsumptionofthehigherpopulation,thisresultedinarisingdemandfornaturalresourceswhichrequireslandusechange.Thischangehavecontributedtoth

　　请英文好的朋友帮助纠正一下英文作文的错误.

　　Urbanisationledtoanincreaseinconsumptionofthehigherpopulation,thisresultedinarisingdemandfornaturalresourceswhichrequireslandusechange.Thischangehavecontributedtothelossofhabitatanddamagetheecosystem.

　　Forexample,becausetherisingdemandformeatincity,tropicalforestsinTabascowererazed.Also,risingdemandforsoybeansandmeatinurbanledtoacceleratingdeforestationintheBrazilian.

　　Expansionofthecityresultsintheincreaseofdemandoffreshwaterresourcesandthisincreasedthecontradictionbetweenthedemandsonfreshwaterandthedemandsofagriculture.South-to-NorthWaterDiversioninChinaissuchanextremeexampleofthiscontradiction.

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　　Urbanisationresultedinanincreaseinconsumptionofthehigherpopulation,andarisingdemandfornaturalresourceswhichrequiresland-usechange.Thischangehavecontributedtothelossofhabitatanddamageoftheecosystem.

　　Forexample,becauseoftherisingdemandformeatincity,tropicalforestsinTabascowererazed.Also,risingdemandforsoybeansandmeatinurbanledtoacceleratingdeforestationintheBrazilian.

　　Expansionofthecitycausedtheincreaseofdemandoffreshwaterresources,whichincreasedthecontradictionbetweenthedemandsonfreshwaterandagriculture.South-to-NorthWaterDiversioninChinaissuchanextremeexampleofthiscontradiction.

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