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　　【帮忙检查英语故事有没有错误语法或单词Helloeveryone.IwanttotellyouastoryaboutMr.ForgetfulandBen.Onepersonisveryforgetful,Whoishe?HeisMr.Forgetful.Hehasadog,hecallsitben.benalwayssay:"Mr.forgetfulisagoodm】

　　帮忙检查英语故事有没有错误语法或单词

　　Helloeveryone.IwanttotellyouastoryaboutMr.ForgetfulandBen.

　　Onepersonisveryforgetful,Whoishe?HeisMr.Forgetful.Hehasadog,hecallsitben.benalwayssay:"Mr.forgetfulisagoodman,butheisn’tagoodmaster.”Becauseheforgetgivebenbreakfasteveryday.

　　Odieandbenaregoodfriends.Odievisitedben'sroom.Mr.forgetfuldidn‘tgivebenbreakfastagain.Bencan'tbearthat.HewantstogiveMr.forgetfulalesson.

　　Benleaveshome.hewantslet’sMr.forgetfulknowheisangry.Mr.fogetfulcan’tfindben.HegoestoLostandFoundOffice.Agirlgreetshimintheoffice.Mr.forgerfulgiveheraphotoofben.Thegirlputphotosintothewindow.

　　OdieandbenpasstheLostandFoundOffice.Benseesphotohisown.HeknowMr.forgetfulislookingforhim.Hegoeshomehappily.butMr.forgertcallshimodie.Benhasnothingtosay.

　　就是这篇