帮忙检查一下这片英语作文（急）初一英语MyfavouritepetMyfavouritepetisamouse.Heismypet.Heisabout1yearsold.WecalledhimDumpling,becauseheisquitefat.Hehasgrey-and-blackfur.Hispawsispink.Hehastwobigblack

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　　Myfavouritepet

　　Myfavouritepetisamouse.Heismypet.Heisabout1yearsold.WecalledhimDumpling,becauseheisquitefat.

　　Hehasgrey-and-blackfur.Hispawsispink.Hehastwobigblackeyesandashottail.Hehuddleslikeaballwhenhesleeps.

　　Heisfriendly,butsometimesheisnaughty.Heranawayforsometimes.Wealwaysfindhiminthecorneroftheroom.Heisquitequiet.Henevermakesanynoise,evenwhenheishungry.

　　Heusuallyeatscereal,sometimesheeatsvegetablesandfruit.Heisn’tanytrouble.HelivesinahutchandIputthehutchinabox.Helikestoeatapplebest.hehatestohaveashower.

　　IfeedDumplingeverydayandgivehimcleanwater.Isometimespalywithhim.

　　Dumplingisreallyagoodfriend.HebringsmehappyandIwilllookafterhimuntiltheend.