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  英语作文检查……学校要求按格式写一篇游记,写完之后我不知道有没有语法上的错误(最近中式英文很厉害)麻烦大家帮忙看看Inthissummerholiday,IwenttoPanlongGorgewithmyclassmates.PanlongGorgei

  英语作文检查……

  学校要求按格式写一篇游记,写完之后我不知道有没有语法上的错误(最近中式英文很厉害)麻烦大家帮忙看看

  Inthissummerholiday,IwenttoPanlongGorgewithmyclassmates.

  PanlongGorgeisaplacewhichwithscenicbeauty,thegreenhillsandclearwatersmadeusrelaxed.

  Favoritescenery:Thewaterandthelavenders.

  Thewatergaveusadeepimpression,treesgrownaroundthebothsidesoftherivuletandwateriscoolandclear.

  Ifyoulookoutofthewindow,youwillseethelavendersisfullofyoueyes.Howbeautifultheyare!Everyonewhohasbeentotheresays.

  Memorablemoment:

  Wewereeatingdeliciousfoodwhileweareenjoyingthebeautifulscenery,duringthattime,wecouldhearthesongsofbird,andbreathethefreshair.IneverfeeleasedsinceIhavegoneintograde9.

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2020-06-0800:39
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  inthis改为during

  aplacewhichwith改为aplacewherethereis

  beauty之后应该分成两句

  treesgrown改为treesgrew,不应该用过去完成时

  wateris改为waterwas,句内时态一致

  lavendersisfullofyoureyes,晕,薰衣草上都是你的眼睛?改为youwillseemanylavenders

  beentothere改为beenthere

  says改为saysso

  whileweare改为whilewewere,时态一致

  songsofbird改为songsofbirds,如果一只鸟的话改为songsofabird

  最后一句改为Ihaveneverfeltsoeasedsince...

2020-06-08 00:41:16
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