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  【帮检查一下这篇英语作文有没有错误,单词还有语法都帮检查下如果可以,帮忙改得更好Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.WhenIwasinaprimaryschool,Iusedtohavesomuchtime.ButnowIhavetogetupearl】

  帮检查一下这篇英语作文有没有错误,单词还有语法都帮检查下

  如果可以,帮忙改得更好

  Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.WhenIwasinaprimaryschool,Iusedtohavesomuchtime.ButnowIhavetogetupearlyandstudyinschoolthewholeday.BeforeIusedtospendalotoftimeplayinggameswithmyfriends.ButnowIdon`thavetimetodothatanymore.Ihavetostudyhaederandharderforagoodhighschool.AndIusedtoplayafterschooleveryday.Butnowit`simpossibleforme.Intheevening,Iusedtohaveagreattimeplayingcomputergames.NowIhardlyeverhavetimeforcomputergames.Ihavetmanyhomeworktodoeverynight.AndthenifIdon`tgotosleepearly,Iwillsleepyandlosemanythingsinclassthesecondday.Ireallymisstheolddays.

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2020-06-0723:42
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  第一行:inaprimaryschool(没有a)

  第四行:foragoodhighschool(为了去学校,而不是为了学校,所以应改成“togotoagoodhighschool”to引导的目的状语从句)

  倒数第二行:willsleepy(willbesleepysleepy是形容词,前面要加be动词)

2020-06-07 23:44:45
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