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　　【高手帮忙修改英语作文--六级主题是关于送孩子去艺术班的看法.ShouldParentsSendTheirKidstoArtclasses?Moreandmorechildrenweresentintoallkindsofartclasses.Ofcourse,therearemoreandmoreartclasseswereheld】

　　高手帮忙修改英语作文--六级主题是关于送孩子去艺术班的看法.

　　ShouldParentsSendTheirKidstoArtclasses?

　　Moreandmorechildrenweresentintoallkindsofartclasses.Ofcourse,therearemoreandmoreartclasseswereheldbyallkindsofpersonorallkindsofeducation/traininggroup.Astherearesomuchkindsofartclasses,theparentswanttosendtheirkidstooneormoreclasses.Sothechildrenweresendintotheclasseswhethertheywishornot.

　　Somepeopleapprovesendchildrentoartclasses,whiletheothersholdtheoppositepoint.Theapproverthinktheclassescanmakethechildrenbecomemoreactiveintheirfuturelifeandtheartabilitiyisalsotheiradvantagewhentheylookforawork,especiallyinthecompetiveworld.Onthecountray,theothersthinkenforcethechildtoattendtheartclasseswouldbeaverybadthing,asifthechildrenunwillingtotheclasses,tididhurttheirheart.Maybethatwouldhaveanegativeimpactonthechild'sfuture.

　　AsfarasIknow,wemustdealthethingverycaution.Ifthechildrenhavethegiftwecouldsendthemtotheartclasses.Ofcourse,ifthechildrenverywillingtostudyintheclasses,weshouldsurelysendthemtotheclasses.Ontheothersituation,wewoludbetternotsendthemtotheseclasses.

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　　ShouldParentsSendTheirKidstoArtclasses?

　　MoreandmorechildrenAREsentintoallkindsofartclasses.Ofcourse,therearemoreandmoreartclassesHELDbyallkindsofPERSONSorallkindsofeducation/trainingGROUPS.AstherearesoMANYkindsofartclasses,theparentswanttosendtheirkidstooneormoreclasses.SothechildrenweresendintotheclassesNOMATTERtheywishornot.

　　SomepeopleapproveTHATTHEYSHOULDsendchildrentoartclasses,whiletheothersholdtheoppositepoint.Theapproverthinktheclassescanmakethechildrenbecomemoreactiveintheirfuturelifeandtheartabilitiyisalsotheiradvantagewhentheylookforawork,especiallyinthecompetiveworld.Onthecountray,theothersthinkTOenforcethechildtoattendtheartclasseswouldbeaverybadthing,asifthechildrenAREunwillingtotheclasses,ITdidhurttheirheart.Maybethatwouldhaveanegativeimpactonthechild'sfuture.

　　AsfarasIknow,wemustdealthethingveryCAREFULLY.Ifthechildrenhavethegiftwecouldsendthemtotheartclasses.Ofcourse,ifthechildrenAREverywillingtostudyintheclasses,weshouldsurelysendthemtotheclasses.Ontheothersituation,wewoludbetternotsendthemtotheseclasses.