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　　帮我改篇六级作文,TheCelebrationofWesternFestivalsRecently,alotofpeopleprefertakingsomewesternfestivalsinChina.Wecanseethattherearemanyloverswithrosesonstreetsandparkson2.14.AndpeopletakeThanksDayandsoonno

　　帮我改篇六级作文,

　　TheCelebrationofWesternFestivals

　　Recently,alotofpeopleprefertakingsomewesternfestivalsinChina.Wecanseethattherearemanyloverswithrosesonstreetsandparkson2.14.AndpeopletakeThanksDayandsoonnowinChina.

　　Thereasonsofthephenomenonlieinseveralaspects.Themainreasonisthatchinesepolityandeconomyarebeingglobal.Chinahasmanyconnectionwithmanycountiesinalotofrespects,besidesculture.Whatismore,nearlyallfestivalsofothercountriesareshowedinfilmsandbooks.,andtheyhelppeopletolearnaboutiteasily,Becauseculturesaredifferentinnotsamebackgroundofhistories,theycanattractmoreandmorepeople,especiallyforyoungers.

　　Therearetworespectsaffectionsfromthephenomenon.Foronething,peoplecanlearnaboutmanycounties’historiesandculturesthroughwesternfestivals.But,other,somepeoplemaypursueforeignthingsexcessivelyinordertoforgetchineseculture,whileitisn’twhatwewanttosee.

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孙朝阳

　　把alotof去掉,

　　记着:有以我们开头的句子用被动语态.

　　Rencently,peopleshowtheirpreferencetosomewesternfestivalsinChina.Therearesomanyexamplestolist,lovers,holdingrosesinparksorstreets,waitfortheirheartpersonsin2.14.Also,ThanksGivingDayisanontheronepeopleappealtotake.

　　Whenweexplorethisphonomenon,someunderlyingfactorsemerge.Butthefollowingarethemostcrucialones.Firstly,asthedevelopmentofnationaleconomy,theconnectbetweenChinaanothercountriesisnotonlypoliticsbutculture.Secondly,filmsandbooksfromwesterncountrieshaveadrasticinfluenceonourChinese,especiallyfortheyoungers.They'dliketoknowmoreabouttheiradoles.suchas007.Lastbutnotleat,somefestivalsinwesterncountriesaresointeresting,takeAprilFool'sDayforexample,peoplecanplayjokestoothers.

　　Althoughwecometoseveralproblems,suchasignorenceofnationalfestivas,alongwiththistendency,it'sreasonableforustobelievethisproblemswillbesolvedinthenearfuturewiththearisingawarenessofpublictowardsnationalfestivals.