【我写的口语考试稿,不知道有什么语法问题没有,希望可以尽量简单和口语化一点MyhobbyIloveACGandhowtoenjoythemiswhatmyhobby.ACGisanewwordthatAforanimation,CforcomicandGforgame.WhenIwaswatchanima】

　　我写的口语考试稿,不知道有什么语法问题没有,希望可以尽量简单和口语化一点

　　Myhobby

　　IloveACGandhowtoenjoythemiswhatmyhobby.ACGisanewwordthatAforanimation,CforcomicandGforgame.WhenIwaswatchanimation,readingcomicorplayinggamefeelsatisfied,relaxedandhappy.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Mostofpeoplethoughttheywerewastemoneyandtime.Andtheywouldhaveabadinfluenceonstudents.Asthepointisreasonable,Idon'tthinklovingandenjoyingACGiswrong.Wecanmakethemandourstudybalance.ThatiswhatIamtryingmybesttodo.Ibelieveitwillcometure.Thatisall,thanks.