topic:

　　Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:

　　Advertisingisthemostimportantcauseofunhealthyeatinghabits.

　　myessay:

　　Nowadaysmanypeoplehavedevelopedunhealthyeatinghabits.Thereasonsarevarious,includingadvertising.Butadvertisingisdefinitelynotthemostimportantone.

　　Indeed,somefoodadvertisementsexaggeratethenutritionofthefood,orinventsomesuperstarstobeadvertisingspokespersonwhichattractthestars’fanstobuythefood.I’veseenanadvertisementofmineralwateronTV,whichsaystheirwaterisfromanaturelakefreeofpollution,withsomehealthymineralsalt.AfterthisTVadvertisementisbroadcast,sincetheadvertisingspokesmanisapopularsinger,alotofyoungpeoplewholikethesingerhaveboughtthewaterofthisbrand.However,thequalitycontrolbureaumadetheirresearchonthewateropen,whichsaidthatthenaturallakeactuallycontainsmuchcontamination.Customerssaidthattheyhavebeencheatedbytheadvertisement.Considerabletheeffectoftheadvertisementis,itcannotcompetewiththeinfluenceofpeople’slifestylewhenpressureandpricearetakenintoaccount.

　　Ibelieve,thelivingtempoisinfacttheprincipalreasonofunhealthyeatinghabits,whichisincreasinglyfastsothatpeoplehavetoshortentheirtimecooking,choosingwhattoeatandeating,inordertospendthesavedtimeonworkingorstudying.Thusfastfoodbecomespopularsinceitsavestime.Peopledonotcarefastfoodisjunkfood;theycarewhethertheycouldfinishtheirtasksontimeandiftheycouldaccomplishtheirworkbetterthanothers.Itiscommonthatoneforgetshislunchtimeandkeepsworkinguntilmidnight.Irregulareatingtimeandjunkfoodmaketheeatinghabitofmodernpeopleextremelyunhealthy.EvensomepeoplehavenotimewatchingTVornewspapers,sotheydon’tknowaboutadvertisements.Howdothoseadvertisementshaveanyeffectonthem?Onlywhenpeopleareawareofthattheyareearningmoneyinexchangeoftheirhealthandstopthisterribleprocesswillthey

　　Finally,thepriceofhealthyfoodisusuallyhigh,sopeoplemaychooseunhealthyfoodjustbecauseoftheprice.OnceinsupermarketIsawthateggsaremuchmoreexpensivethatarelaidbychickenwhicharenotinjectedwithhormonethanthoselaidbychickenwithhormoneinjections.Althoughweknowthattheexpensiveeggsarehealthier,westillchosethecheapereggssincethepriceistoohightopurchase.Capableofaffordinghealthyfoodarethosepeoplewhoownlotsofmoney.Iffoodmanufacturesproducefoodwithmoreattentiontopeople’swholesomeness,therewouldbemorehealthyfoodthatcanbepurchasedbycommonpeople.

　　Allinall,therearelotsofreasonsthatledpeopledevelopunhealthyhabit,ofcourse,includingadvertisement.Frommyperspective,themostimportantoneisthatwehavelesstimeonpreparingeatingandthinklittleaboutit.

　　谈自己的看法,不一定要绝对同意,或者绝对不同意.写的时候可以分析一下,广告对于不健康的饮食习惯起到了什么作用.再展开思考一下,不健康的饮食习惯是怎么引起的,还有其他的什么原因.比如个人挑食啊,没有好的生活习惯,导致没有按时吃饭,等等.慢慢的就可以把文章展开,写长了.