TheWorldExpo2010ShanghaihasalreadyendedonOctober31,2010.AsChinesepeople,weareveryproudofit.DuringtheExpoShanghaiwasreallythecenteroftheworld’sattention.It’sagreatglobaleventandofcourseitisgoodforChina,anditalsobringsmealot.

　　Firstofall,thankstotheExpo,Ilearnedmoreabouttheworld.TheExpoisjustlikealittleworldwherepeoplecannotonlyseerareculturaltreasuresfromaroundtheworld--thestatueofAthenafromGreeceandFrenchimpressionistmasterpieces,forexample--butalsogetatasteofthediversityoftheworld'sculturesthroughmorethan20,000culturalevents.

　　Secondly,theExposloganis“Bettercity,Betterlife”.ShanghaiExpoisagreatchancefortheChineseeconomygrowth,becausemanycountrieshadarapidgrowthineconomyaftertheWorldExpo,andtheirGDPbrokethroughabottleneck.IthinkwecanalsoenjoythiseconomygrowthaftertheExpo,andwewillallhaveabetterlife.Moreover,itclosestherelationshipofChinawithothercountries.China’sstatusintheworldishighernow.

　　Inall,IthinktheExpoisaremarkable,evenhistoricevent.Anditdoesbringmealot.That’sall,thankyouforlistening!

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　　The2010ShanghaiExpo,whichwasheldfromMay1toOctober31,hadbringconsiderablebenefitstothedevelopmentofChinainmanyaspects,

　　Firstly,tocitizensofShanghai,it’sagoodopportunitytoustointroduceourlovelyhomelandtoforeignersandmakeShanghaiamorecharmingcity.Secondly,toShanghai,it’sawonderfultimetoattractinternationalcompaniestobranchinShanghaiandthiswillpromotethedevelopmentofShanghai’seconomystandard.Thirdly,toChina,itwillclosetheralationshipwithothercountries.China’sstatusintheworldwillbehigher

　　Asisoutlinedabove,the2010ShanghaiExpowillbringusalotofbenefits.Andwearesurewecanholdthisinternationalactivitysucessfully.ThefutureofShanghaiwillbebrighterandbrighter.

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　　Asweallknow,the2010ShanghaiExpohasalreadyended.Thebenefitsitcanbringuscanbeconcludedin3Cs:

　　Creation,ChallengeandChance.ItisknowntoallthattheWorldExpohadbroughtusmanycreations,suchasmobilephone,carandelectriclight.Sowhatnewinventionsandcreationscan2010ShanghaiExpobringusandhowcantheychangeourlife?Itremainstobeseen.Wemaytakeadvantageinit.2010ShanghaiExpoisachallengetoShanghai.MillionsofforeignerswillcometoShanghai.HowcanweorganizethebestWorldExpo?Everythingwedomaymatterandlaydeepimpressiononthoseforeigners.IfweperformwellintheExpo,ourcountry’sstatusandfamewillraisealot.Besides,2010ShanghaiExpoisalsoagreatchance.ManycountrieshadarapidgrowthineconomyaftertheWorldExpo,andtheirGDPbrokethroughabottleneck.Ithinkwecanalsoenjoytheeconomygrowthafterthe2010ShanghaiWorldExpo,andmanyofour1.2billionbrotherswillhaveabetterlife.

　　Asthe2010ShanghaiWorldExpocomingcloserandcloser,

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　　Asthe2010ShanghaiWorldExpocomingcloserandcloser,TheShanghaiWorldExpo2010isthenextmajoreventinChinafollowingthe2008BeijingOlympics.ItwillbethefirstregisteredWorldExpoinadevelopingcountry,whichgivesexpressiontotheexpectationsonChina'sfuturedevelopment.

　　Firstly,TocitizensofShanghai,it’sagoodopportunitytoustointroduce