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  英语改错10处错误MyfriendJackwhowasalwaysworkinghardlysothathecouldearnenoughtobuyacarofhisown.Heusedtosay,“MylifewillbebetterwhenIgetanicercar.”Ittookhimmorethanthreeyearstomakehisdreamscometru

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  MyfriendJackwhowasalwaysworkinghardlysothathecouldearnenoughtobuyacarofhisown.Heusedtosay,“MylifewillbebetterwhenIgetanicercar.”Ittookhimmorethanthreeyearstomakehisdreamscometrue.However,Jackwasnotsatisfiedwithwhathehasachieved.Heworkedevenharder,hopedthathewouldabletobuyabighousewithabeautifulgarden.Oneday,Itoldhimselfthathappinessisajourney,notadestination.Trytodowhatyoulikeandenjoywhatyoucanenjoyatthepresent,andyouwillfeelregretfulwhenyouaretoooldtodoanything.

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2020-06-0311:18
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  第一行:去掉who(不然没有主句)hardly--hard(hardly是副词,意思是几乎不,hard也是副词,是努力地)第二行:nicer--nice(没有比较)第四行:has--had(前后时态一致)wouldable--wouldbeable(没有动词)hop...

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