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　　Hello,everybody.IamPuyuhan.Thissummerisspecialtome.BecauseIknowaperson.HisnameisHuachenyu.Heisdifferentfromothers.Hecomefromasingleparentfamily.Notlongago,heisjustanordinaryguy.Butnowhehasmanyfansofthestar.However,Ithinkheislonely.Heisalittestrange.Whenhesingsasiftheworldishis,andhisvoicecandeeplytouchedme.Heismymotivation.IthinkIhavebeendeeplyinlovewithhim.That’sallthankyou.

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2020-06-0315:56

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　　Hello,everybody.IamPuyuhan.Thissummerisspecialtome.ThisisbecauseIknowaperson.HisnameisHuachenyu.Heisdifferentfromothers.Hecomefromasingleparentfamily.Notlongago,heisjustanordinaryguy.Now,hehasmanyfans.However,Ithinkheislonely.Heisalittestrange.Whenhesings,heisasiftheworldbelongstohim.Hisvoicecandeeplytouchedme.Heismymotivation.IthinkIhavebeendeeplyinlovewithhim.That’sallthankyou

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　　Notmuchgrammarerror

　　trytouseshortsentences

　　avoidsentencethatstartswith'because','but','And'.

　　Personally,Idon'tliketouse,'that'sall.'