【谁能帮我改一下这个英语作文.WewenttoChongqingGardenExpoParkyesterday.manyofusbringssomefoodanddrinks.Somepeoplebroughtcamera.Ittookusaboutonehourtogettherebybus.Thereweremanyvisitors.Theylookedexcited."What】

　　谁能帮我改一下这个英语作文.

　　WewenttoChongqingGardenExpoParkyesterday.manyofusbringssomefoodanddrinks.Somepeoplebroughtcamera.Ittookusaboutonehourtogettherebybus.Thereweremanyvisitors.Theylookedexcited."Whatabeautifuplace!"Isaid.ThenwevisitedthedifferentkindsofChinesetraditionalgardenandtooksomephotos.Wealsolearnedalotofknowledge.

　　Whenwehavefunexploring,InoticedLiLeiwaslost.Wereallyworriedabouthimandaskedaguardforhelp.Thanksgoodness!Wefoundhimatlast.Thenweenjoyedourselves.

　　Whataspecialday!