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  请帮我看看这段话哪里有错误并且帮我改正一下IfIcanchoosetohowtodie,Iwanttoimitateofhim,thenIcanknowwholovesme,whoreallycareaboutme.ButIcan'tseetheseSo,IamnotpleasednowIfmynamewillappearonthebai

  请帮我看看这段话哪里有错误并且帮我改正一下

  IfIcanchoosetohowtodie,Iwanttoimitateofhim,thenIcanknowwholovesme,whoreallycareaboutme.

  ButIcan'tseethese

  So,

  Iamnotpleasednow

  Ifmynamewillappearonthebaiduencyclopediainthefuture

  Itrecordedthestoryaboutmylifeaftermydeath,

  but,

  Icannotcontinuetousebaidu.

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2020-06-0310:56
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  1.choose后的to去掉,2.care改为cares,3.willappear去掉will,4.recorded改为willrecord

2020-06-03 10:57:40
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