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　　帮我看看这段话有没有什么错误?Iwritetheletterforappreciatingthatyouhavegivenaraisetomesincethismonth.IworkedinArtechformorethan1year,andthisismyfirstjobaftergraduating.Actually,Ilovethisjobsomuch,becau

　　帮我看看这段话有没有什么错误?

　　Iwritetheletterforappreciatingthatyouhavegivenaraisetomesincethismonth.IworkedinArtechformorethan1year,andthisismyfirstjobaftergraduating.Actually,Ilovethisjobsomuch,becauseIamaoutgoinggirl,andIthinkIamgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.SoIhavealwaysthoughtthatHRismybestcareerchoice.IhaveseenmanypeopleleftfromArtech,includeourpreviousboss,ourpreviousrecruitingmanager,ourpreviousaccountant.SoIfeelveryhonouredthatIamtheoldestoneinArtech.

　　Doyouremeberwhatthethinghappenedon14thMarch.Wecontinuedtoreceivethecallforhalfanhour,onepersoncalledeveryrecruiterformanytimes,butheld10secondsandnospeaking.Sowewereverycurious,andtalkedwitheachothers.Imentionedyournameatthattime"Abhijitdon'tknowwhatwearedoing".Ijustwanttoexplainthatthing.Hopeyounotmisunderstandme.

　　Icanunderstandyousomuch,youareourmanager,needtotakeonalltheresponsiblityofourdailywork.andmaybechinaisalsoastrangecountrytoyou.Youmustbeverytriedeveryday.

　　Sofeelfreetocontactmeifyouwant,IcanhelpyoutodealwithmanythingsifIcould.AndIwillalwayssupportyouforthework.Hopewearefriendsallthetime.

　　Intheend,thanksagainforthesalaryhiketome.

　　那怎么才不算是中国式英语

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　　写的很中国英语～

　　DearXX,

　　Iwanttoappreciatethesalaryraiseyougavemelastmonth.IhaveworkedforArtechformorethanayear,andthisismyfirstjobaftergraduating.IlovethisjobverymuchbecauseIamanoutgoinggirlandIliketocommunicatewithothers.IhavealwaysthoughtthatHRismybestcareerchoice.Ihaveseenmanypeopleleftthiscompany.AndIfeelveryhonouredtobetheoldest(是指老么?)inArtech.

　　DoyouremeberwhathappenedonMarch14th?Wecontinuedtoreceiveanonymouscallsforhalfanhour.Thispersoncalledeveryrecruitermanytimes,butonlyheldfortensecondswithoutspeakinganything.Sowewereverycurious,andtalkedtoeachothersaboutit.Imentionedthatyoudidn'tknowwhatweweredoing.IjustwanttoexplainthatIdidn'tmeanit.Iamsorryforit.Ihopeyoudon'tmisunderstandme.

　　Icantotallyunderstandyourpressure.Youareourmanagerandneedtotakealltheresponsiblitiesofourdailywork.MaybeChinaisastrangecountrytoyou.Youmustbeverytriedeveryday.

　　Ihopeyoufeelfreetotalktomeifyouwantto.Icanhelpyoutodealwithproblemsandconcerns.AndIwillalwayssupportyouforthework.Hopewecanbefriendsallthetime.

　　Intheend,thanksagainforthesalary

　　raise.Iwon'tletyoudown.(我不会让你失望的)

　　yourssincerely,

　　XXX