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　　【高中短文改错,共有十处错误.麻烦英语学得好的人帮忙做一下啊.LastSaturday,Iputmywalletinthebagwhichwasatbackofmybike.Irodeforabouthalfanhour.AsInearedmyhomeIfoundthatIkeptthebagopeningallthewa】

　　高中短文改错,共有十处错误.麻烦英语学得好的人帮忙做一下啊.

　　LastSaturday,Iputmywalletinthebagwhichwasatbackofmybike.Irodeforabouthalfanhour.AsInearedmyhomeIfoundthatIkeptthebagopeningalltheway.Thewallethadfallenoutsomewhereintheway,itmademeupset.JustthenIreceivedaphonecallsayingthatmyneighboriswaitingforme.Someonehadsentittomyhome.IfeltverypleasingandIwenthomeatonce.ItwasturnedoutthatIputmyIDcardinthewallet.Noonewasathomeforhegaveittomyneighbor.I'veneverfoundoutwhathewasbecausehedidn'ttellmyneighborshisnamewhenheleft.

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　　LastSaturday,IputmywalletinthebagwhichwasatTHEbackofmybike.IHADrodeforabouthalfanhour.AsICAMEnearmyhomeIfoundthatIkeptthebagopeningalltheway.ThewallethadfallenoutsomewhereONtheway,itmademeupset.JustthenIreceivedaphonecallsayingthatmyneighborWASwaitingforme.Someonehadsentittomyhome.IfeltveryPLEASEDandIwenthomeatonce.ItTUENEDoutthatIputmyIDcardinthewallet.Noonewasathome,SOhegaveittomyneighbor.I'veneverfoundoutWHOhewasbecauseheHADN'TTOLDmyneighborshisnamewhenheleft.