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　　这是我写的六级作文HowtoImproveStudents’MentalHealth(150words)Nowadays,students’mentalunhealthhasbroughtaboutlotsofproblemssuchasdelinquency,takingdrugandsoforth.Therefore,thedutyhowtoimprovetheirmentalhealth

　　这是我写的六级作文

　　HowtoImproveStudents’MentalHealth(150words)

　　Nowadays,students’mentalunhealthhasbroughtaboutlotsofproblemssuchasdelinquency,takingdrugandsoforth.Therefore,thedutyhowtoimprovetheirmentalhealthisnotonlyfortheirparentsbutalsoforschools.

　　Itisknowntoallthatstudents’learningefficiencywillbebadlyaffected,ifthey’reinpressureforalongtimeandcouldn’tadjusttheirmind.Itisvitaltoschoolstofindeffectivewaystohelpthemgetridofthepressure.First,schoolscanorganizeinterestingactivitiestothestudents,whichareabletohelpthemrelax.Inaddition,don’tarrangetoomuchextrahomeworkforthem.Toomuchhomeworkisn’tabletoimprovetheirstudyprogressandevenburdenthem.

　　Fromwhathasdiscussedabove,schoolsshouldtrythembesthelpingstudentsimprovetheirmind.Butasstudentsthemselves,theyalsoshouldlearntoadapttheirpresentschoollifetohelpthemadjusttheirmind.

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2020-06-0309:52

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陈志东

　　First,schoolscanorganizeinterestingactivitiestoforthestudents,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,schoolsshouldtrytheirbesttohelpstudentsimprovetheirmind.

2020-06-03 09:54:45

饶云华

　　除此之外观点怎么样

2020-06-03 09:57:39

陈志东

　　条理很清晰，在how上能再适当发挥写更好，比如organizeinterestingactivitiestothestudents，可以具体指出组织哪些活动

2020-06-03 09:59:21

饶云华

　　那么想语法错误什么之类的有吗还有10分能打多少？麻烦你帮我下

2020-06-03 10:03:12

陈志东

　　takingdrugandsoforth.Therefore,thedutyhowtoimprovetheirmentalhealthisnotonlyfortheirparentsbutalsoforschools.这句话逻辑上不是很通顺。个人认为可以改为Therefore,toimprovetheirmentalhealthhasbecomeanimportantandurgentproplemwhichistobesolved.能打6、7分吧。内容再充实些更好

2020-06-03 10:04:54

饶云华

　　活动可不可以写activitieslikebasketballgames,musicappreciationandsoon.

2020-06-03 10:09:06

陈志东

　　可以。提供心理咨询也可以

2020-06-03 10:12:48

饶云华

　　Thankyou.以后有不懂的请教您！

2020-06-03 10:15:11

陈志东

　　Notatall