托福作文求批改独立写作：doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Parentsshouldallowchildrentomakemistakesandletthemlearnfromthem.我的作文：Parents’educationhasalwaysbeenanimportantpartIchildren’s

　　托福作文求批改

　　独立写作：doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:

　　Parentsshouldallowchildrentomakemistakesandletthemlearnfromthem.

　　我的作文：

　　Parents’educationhasalwaysbeen

　　animportantpartIchildren’sgrowth.Itisunderstandablethatparentswant

　　theirchildrentoenrichtheirknowledge.Accordingly,somepeopleholdthe

　　viewthatparentsshouldallowtheirchildrentomakemistakesandletthemto

　　learnfromtheexperience.Frommypointofview,Idisagree.

　　Admittedly,mistakesenables

　　childrentodiscernwhat'scorrectandwhat'swrong,thustheycanknowhowto

　　addressthesameproblemnexttime.Itisnohardjobtoimaginethatachild

　　whotouchedtheboilingwaterwillnolongerdothesamethingagain.Theundesirable

　　resultscanimpresschildrenalot,sotheygetimpressiveexperiencefrom

　　mistakes.However,itisnotthecaseinreality.

　　Foronething,somemistakescould

　　betooserioustomakeup.Considertakingdrugs.Achildmaybecuriousaboutthem

　　andtakethemforfun.Itistoolatetocorrectthemistakeonceithappens.What

　　weonlygetisregret,anddrawingexperiencefromthiswillmakenosense.Consider

　　suicide.Achildwhofeelsconfusedabouthisfuturemaychoosecommitting

　　suicidetoputhimselftoanend.Considertheft.Achildstealswithout

　　preventionfromparentswilleventuallybecaughtandconfrontsanction.Tragedy

　　happensfromtimetotimeifparentsallowtheirchildrentomakemistakesno

　　matterwhattheyare.

　　Foranotherthing,thereare

　　betterwaysforparentstohelptheirchildrendrawexperience.Theycantake

　　themselvesasexamples.Tellingtheirmistakeswhentheywereyoungsterstotheir

　　childrennotonlygivesthechildrenachanceoflearningandavoidingmaking

　　thesamemistakeagain,butalsopromotestherelationshipbetweenparentsand

　　children.Besides,childrencanwatcheducationalandinformativeTVprograms.By

　　watchingLawsOnline,childrenwillgettoknowtheconsequenceofcriminals

　　andtrytoobeylaws.B