新托福作文求批改~~在家工作好不好正文：Haveyoueverworkedforafulldaylongperiodwithoutanybreak?Haveyoueverfelthelplessbecauseofnopearsaroundyouwhenfacingtoaproblem?Haveyoueverhadasenseoflonenessfor

　　新托福作文求批改~~

　　在家工作好不好

　　正文：

　　Haveyoueverworkedforafulldaylongperiodwithoutanybreak?Haveyoueverfelthelplessbecauseofnopearsaroundyouwhenfacingtoaproblem?Haveyoueverhadasenseoflonenessforstayingalldaylongathome?

　　Ifyouhavesomekindsoftheseexperience,youwillknowworkingathomeusingcomputersortelephonesinsteadofworkingintheofficeisabadidea.Reasonsarecommingasfollows:

　　Workingathomecanlowertheeffectivenessandthusresultinkeepingworkingalldaylong.Insteadofofficeworkingtime,norestrictworkingisneededwhenyouareathome.Thatmeans,youcangotoworkineverytinyperiodoftime.Freedomyoucanfeelright?However,inotherway,freedomofworkingtimemeansnofreedomofrestingtime.Youmaykeepalldayworkingbecauseofthepileofjobsnevergodown.Nosayingtheworkingtime,howabouttheefficency?Noonewouldjustifyyourefficencyanymore,andthusyourworkingeffectivenesswillbelower,makinglesscontributetothecompany.So,workingathomedonogoodtoaregularworkingtimeandmaylowertheefficiency.

　　Workinginanofficehavemanybeneficials.Oneofthemostobviouslybenefitisthat,youcancooperatewithyourofficepartners.Nowadaysweallvaluecooperationveryhighforthereasonthat,"Cooperationisproductivity"Imagingthatwhenyouhaveanassignmenttodesignacomputerhardware,howmuchyouneedateamorcooperationgrouptofufillthisgoal.Admitedly,workingathomemayprovideyouaquitesurroundingsforinspirations,butthisjustanaspectofthetotalassignment,youstillneedgroupworkswhichhome-workingcannotprovideyou.Insum,workinginofficecanhelpyoucommunicatebetterwithyourpartners.

　　Workinginoffice,insometimes,workasagroup,willsurelyincreaseyourrelationshipwithpartners.Allofusarefreshbodies,weallneedfriendshipstokeepahealthymind.Soworkinginoffinecansurelyprovideusanopiniontogetsuchkindsofrelationships.

　　Tosumupallmyopinions,althoughworkingathomecanprovidesomeconveniencesuchasfreescheduleandquietsurroundings,it'sbenefitscannotconquirthatofworkinginoffice,whichcanproveourofficency,helpuscooperatebetterandincreaseourrelationshipbetweenoth