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  托福独立写作,求批改!谢谢!题目:Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsliveintheirhometowns.Othersliveindifferenttownsandcities.Whichdoyouthinkisbetter?Givereasonsforyouranswer.正文:Afterth

  托福独立写作,求批改!谢谢!

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  Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsliveintheirhometowns.Othersliveindifferenttownsandcities.Whichdoyouthinkisbetter?Givereasonsforyouranswer.

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  Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsprefertoliveintheirhometownswhileotherschoosetoliveindifferenttownsorcities.Everybodyhashisownreasonsforhispreference.

  Aftermygraduation,Iwillgobackandliveinmyhomecity.Ihavemadethisdecisionbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

  Firstly,myhomecityisabigcitythatcanofferalot.Thereareplentyofopportunitiesforwork,manybiglibrariesforstudies,severaldifferrentmusiumsforvisit,andnumerouscinemas,theatersandcentersforentertainment.WhenIgobackthere,IwillhavenodifficultyinfindingajobsuitableformeandIcanmakeuseofallthefacilitiesavailablethere.

  Secondly,ifIgobacktomyhomecity,Icanlookaftermyparents.ItakethisintoconsiderationbecauseIamtheironlychildandtheyarenowweakandgettingoninage.IfIliveinthesamecitywiththem,Icanvisitthemveryoftenandhelpthemwheneveritisnecessary.

  Thirdly,ifIliveinmyhomecity,Iwillhavealotoffriends,schoolmatesandrelativestovisitandtoturntoforhelpwhenIneed.Ofcourse,IcouldgetacquaintedwithmanypeopleandmakemanyfriendsifIweretogotoliveinastrangeplace,butthattakestime.IfIgobacktomyhomecity,everybodywillbewaitingformeandIwillbeabletosettledowncomfortablywithoutanytroubleandwasteoftime.

  Inshort,mychoiseisbasedonacarefulconsiderationofmyhomecityandmyfamily.Ithinkitisabetterorsensiblechoice;inacertainsense,itisamust.

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陈铁军

  写得不错,很详尽.但我觉得有些跑题.题目是问你个人对此问题的看法,不是你个人选择.试着写了一篇如下:Aftercompletionofuniversitystudy,somestudentschoosetoliveintheirhometowns,whileotherschooset...

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