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　　英语作文修正帮忙看看这两篇作文有没有什么语法错误,帮忙用一些比较好的句式改一下,让这两篇作文升华!familyrulesAbouteveryhomehasownfamilyrulesmaybetheruleshavelittestrict.OFcourse,myhomehasr

　　英语作文修正

　　帮忙看看这两篇作文有没有什么语法错误,帮忙用一些比较好的句式改一下,让这两篇作文升华!familyrulesAbouteveryhomehasownfamilyrulesmaybetheruleshavelittestrict.OFcourse,myhomehasrules,too.first,childrenshouldnotallowedtogooutorreturnhometoolate.secondonschooldays,childrenshouldnotbeallowedtowatchtvorplaycomputerthirddonotfightwithsisterorbrotherforthchildrencanchooseownclotherangmakingfriends.Ithinktherulesisparents'sloveformesoIdon'tmindit

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　　Familyrules

　　Abouteveryfamilyhasitsownrules,maybetherulesarealittlestrict.Ofcourse,therearesomerulesinmyfamily,too.First,Iamnotallowedtogooutorcomebacktoolate.Second,IamnotallowedtowatchTVorplaycomputer.Third,don'tfightwithsistersorbrothers.Finally,Iamsoluckytochoosemyownclothesandmakingfriends.Althoughsomerulesaretoostrict,Idon'tmindit,becausetheylovemesomuch!