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  Date对方地址Dearsir,Re:Packingfor“Guangshi”MooncakeThankyouforyourproposalofregardingthepackingofourorderforready-made“Guangshi”Mooncake.We’dliketoconfirmourpackingrequirmentsasfollows:First,eachmooncakeshoul

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  Dearsir,

  Re:Packingfor“Guangshi”Mooncake

  Thankyouforyourproposalofregardingthepackingofourorderforready-made“Guangshi”Mooncake.We’dliketoconfirmourpackingrequirmentsasfollows:

  First,eachmooncakeshouldbepackedinplasticbagsothattheproductscanbeseendirectly,theneachbagmustbefilledwithnitrogen(氮气)intheinner,whichcanextendqualityguaranteeperiodoftheproducts,10bagstoaexquisitecasenext,whichwillhelptopromotethesales.Inordertosavemoresafe,50casestoacardboardcarton.Thecartonsshouldbestrongenoughagainstroughhandingandlongoceantransportation.

  Pleasepackthegoodsstrictly.AstheMid-Autumnfestivaliscoming,pleasespeedupshipmentforustocatchit.

  Yoursfaithfully,

  Jet

  Manager

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2020-05-2905:05
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  1)proposalofregarding中of删掉.或者是删掉regarding2)withnitrogen(氮气)intheinner,可以改成withnitrogeninside.虽然没有什么语法错误,但是感觉还是不够简洁3)savemoresafe整体到没什么语法错误,...

2020-05-29 05:07:22
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