把我改作文：Greatchangesinmyhometown个位英语高手给个分数,然后把我改一下,本人高三（不好意思水平很烂,在冲刺阶段,英语更加要充实）GreatchangesinmyhometownIrememberwhenIwasachild,myhometown

　　把我改作文：Greatchangesinmyhometown

　　个位英语高手给个分数,然后把我改一下,本人高三（不好意思水平很烂,在冲刺阶段,英语更加要充实）

　　Greatchangesinmyhometown

　　IrememberwhenIwasachild,myhometownwasonlyasmallcity,Andthefieldswerenotfarfrommyhome.Soifyouwanttihaveagoodbreath,youcouldwalktothatfieldsforhavingagoodbreath.

　　Now,about15yearsago,myhometownhasgreatchanges.Forexample:everyfieldswerechangedintothebigbuildings,andtherearemoreandmorecarsacrossonthestreethereandthere.Butifyouwanttorelaxandhaveagoodbreath,you’dbettertofindthefieldsfromthecityedge..

　　I’mpleasedtohavethisdevelopedhometown,butI’llneverforgetthehomewhichwascleanandbeautbeforethen.

　　一定要先给个分数,我估一下我月考的分数!谢谢!

　　总分就是15分!