(英语牛人进)英语改错.这是一篇简短的note.Iamsorrytonotinviteyoutotravelaroundmyhometownforyourbusytrip.Iknowyou'vetravledsomefamousinterests,butthereisalsosomethinginterestingyou'veneverexperienced.Ifyou

　　(英语牛人进)英语改错.

　　这是一篇简短的note.

　　Iamsorrytonotinviteyoutotravelaroundmyhometownforyourbusytrip.

　　Iknowyou'vetravledsomefamousinterests,butthereisalsosomethinginterestingyou'veneverexperienced.Ifyouwerefreenextvacationandwouldliketogotravelingagain,Iwillbeyourguidewithpleasure!Somethingmorebeautifulandmoredeliciousiswaitingforyou!

　　第二句的traveled打错了。