我需要别人帮我修改英文作文中的语法.ThomasTsaiIamtheadvisoratCoastCommunityCollege.Ineedtohelpmystudenttogetthebestchoiceeveryday.Itwasbecausesomestudentsdon’tknowhowtochoosethecoursereallyhelpfulfo

　　我需要别人帮我修改英文作文中的语法.

　　ThomasTsai

　　IamtheadvisoratCoastCommunityCollege.Ineedtohelpmystudenttogetthebestchoiceeveryday.Itwasbecausesomestudentsdon’tknowhowtochoosethecoursereallyhelpfulfortheirfuture.ThomasTsaiisinwhichstudentsIamsaying.ThomasTsaiisafirstyearstudentincollege,maybethisisthereasonThomasdon’tknowhowtochoosethecourse.ThomasTsaihasaheavycourseinthissemesterandheplantotransfertoCoastStateUniversityaftertwoyears,itmeansThomasTsaineedtogetthegoodgradeaftertwoyearsandgettheenoughcredit.ButThomasTsaiisbusy,ThomasTsaineedtoworkstentofifteenhoursperweektohelphisfamilyattheirfamily-ownedbookandstationerystore.ThomasTsaiishisparents’onlychildandhishelpisimportanttokeepingthestoreinbusiness.IthinkthisistheonereasonThomasTsaichoosemajoringinbusinessaccounting.ButIstilltoknowifThomasTsaikeeptogoingallcoursehechoose,itwouldgetthebadgradeinsomecourse.Iknowthefirstyearstudentsalwayswanttotakeallcoursetheywanttotakeandtheyneverthinkit’sworkornot.ThomasTsaiistakingfiveclasses:IntroductiontoAccounting,ChineseImmigrationtoCalifornia,IntermediateMath,StudySkillandIntroductiontoReadingandWriting.ItistooheavyforThomasTsai.TheproposeIwanttogiveThomasTsaiisheneedtodropaclass.IknowThomasTsai’shighschoolgradeswerenotthebest.ThomasTsaihavemanyclassisgetaDorCinhighschoolgrades.IthinkThomasTsaiisnotreallyunderstandinghowtostudy,So,Idon’tthinkThomasTsaicantakefiveclassesatthesametime.TheproblemforknowiswhatclassThomasTsaishoulddrop?

　　IthinkThomasTsaishoulddropChineseImmigrationtoCalifornia,becausethisclassisnotrequiredtograduateforcollege.Thisisagoodclassandteacherisverypatientandencouragingtoo.ThomasTsaihasafriendtakethisclassbeforeandhefriendthinkthisclassishelpherdoingbetterinallofhercollegeclass.Andthisclasswillbecredittocounttorequiregraduating.ThomasTsaithinksthisclassisinterestingforheandhethinkishelpinghimtolearnalot.However,therearemanydrawbackstotheclassaswell.Thomasdon’treallyneedthisclassforgraduatesandthisisaspecialclass,Thomasisafraidthatitmigh