【哪位高手帮我看看这篇文章哪里有错误,最好可以缩短一些,太长了,同学说第一段没用,高中水平就可以了,文章帮忙改短一些好吧,120词就行了Everybodyshouldhaveoneormoredreamanddifferentpeoplehaved】

　　哪位高手帮我看看这篇文章哪里有错误,最好可以缩短一些,太长了,同学说第一段没用,

　　高中水平就可以了,文章帮忙改短一些好吧,120词就行了

　　Everybodyshouldhaveoneormoredreamanddifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams.Thebusinessmanholdthatearnmuchmoneyistheirdream.Theacademicstaffbelievethathavingahighacademictitleatafamousuniversityoraresearchinstituteisthedream.Asastudent,Iadmittedtoagooduniversityismydream.Inordertoachievemydream,Ithink,thefollowingsareverynecessary.

　　Toachievemydreams,firstofall,itisimportantformetohaveaclearlong-termgoalinourlife.Besides,Ihaveshorttermgoalsindifferentperiodsoflife.Asweknow,itistheseshorttermgoalsthatmakeourlong-termgoalpossible.Second,weshouldbebothperseverantandhardworking.Whateverwedo,therearealwaystwopossibilities:successandfailure.IneverloseconfidencewhenIgetintotroubleorwhenIamconfrontedwithfailure.Instead,Icanlearnfrommyexperience,buildupmyconfidenceandworkharderandharder.Third,Ilearntheexamplesofthosewhoaresuccessful.Fromthem,tofindthekeytosuccess.Finally,Iwillgetalongwellwithmyclassmates.Icancareforeachotherandhelpeachotherinourstudy,ourworkandourlife,becauseteamworkisofgreatimportanceintherealizationofourdream.

　　IthinkIcanfollowtheseprinciples,Iwillcertainlyachievemydreamsinmylife.