急,大家快来帮忙看看,英语口试...这是我写的,大家帮忙看看,帮我找找语法错误或是一些修改的意见.Doyouthinklearningtodriveismustnowadays?Areyougoingtolearntodrive?Why?Inmyopinion,learningtodrivei

　　急,大家快来帮忙看看,英语口试...

　　这是我写的,大家帮忙看看,帮我找找语法错误或是一些修改的意见.

　　Doyouthinklearningtodriveismustnowadays?

　　Areyougoingtolearntodrive?Why?

　　Inmyopinion,learningtodriveisnotanecessarythingforustodonowadays,therearemanyproofscansupportmyidea.

　　Firstofall,thegasolinebecamelessandexpensive,ifthegasolinehadbeenuseduportooexpensiveforus,thecarswouldbeuseless,andbecauseofthenumberofcarshasincreasedveryquickly,somaybetenortwentyyearslater,therewillbenomoreroomsontheroadforcarstotravel.Ontheotherhand,toomanycarsalsomeanssomanyaccidents,I’msurenoonewouldbegladtogetinjured,andaccordingtoasurveyontheInternet,Ihavefoundthatdrivingwouldcauseafewhealthyproblems,suchascervicalspondylosisandhighbloodpressure.Inaword,itisworthlessforpeopletohavesuchalongtimetolearntodriveifdrivingwouldbenouseorevenwoulddamageyourhealth.

　　Secondly,justlikeaChineseidiom“Therearen'tnosuchthingasfreelunch”said,thefeeoflearningtodriveisagreatmountofmoney,whatisworse,theexamisbecomingharderandharder,soaftertakingsuchalargenumberofmoney,youstillwouldfailintheexam.Atlastyoupasstheexam,butyouhavepaidthousandsofYuan,doesitworth?

　　Ithinkitisworthless,soIwon’tlearntodrive,notonlythereasonsIhavementioned,butalsoIthinkIamtoosillytolearntodrive.Ididn’thaveaquickreaction,soitishardformetoreactquicklyifImetemergency.Maybelearninghowtodriveaplaneisbetterforme,forthereisnopedestrianinthesky.

　　PS:我是高一的