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　　求修改英文自传语法错误QAQ急非常感谢这是我申请大学要用的今晚就要交了非常感谢QAQ不常用百度知道.我很穷请不要嫌弃悬赏很低Mynameis.;IwasborninMainlandChinainXi’an.Ihaveanordinary

　　求修改英文自传语法错误QAQ急非常感谢

　　这是我申请大学要用的今晚就要交了

　　非常感谢QAQ

　　不常用百度知道.我很穷请不要嫌弃悬赏很低

　　Mynameis.;

　　IwasborninMainlandChinainXi’an.Ihaveanordinarybuthappyfamily,andmyparentsveryloveme.Meanwhile,theroadinmorethantenyearsofschooling,Ialmostnotmetanybigsetbacks.Fromjuniortoseniorhighschool,Ihavemaintainedthehighhonorsintheclass.Ioftenattendvariouswritingcontestandacquiregoodgrades,sinceIamveryinterestedinwriting,actually,asfarasIamconcernedthatthesecompetitionsareverypreciousexperience;theyencouragemetobecomemoreconfidentespeciallywhenIgotgoodgrades.

　　IalsoperformedverywellinEnglish,andoftengetthefirstinexam.Inmyopinion,myEnglishteacherhashelpedmealotinmyEnglishlearning,theencouragesofhergavemeagreatdealofconfident.Shecananswermyconfusioninthelearningpatiently,andsheoftenlendmetheEnglishmagazineandherfavoritebooks.Throughoutreadingtheseinterestingbooksandmagazines,notonlyletmyEnglishabilitygetsahugeleapandletmelikeEnglishmore,butalsofirmmyconfidencetolearnEnglishbetter.

　　Inhighschoolthreeyears,IservedasChiefofbooks,classrepresentatives,vicesquadandchemistryclassrepresentative.Thesecadresasexperienceshasthoughtmealot,includinghonedmyabilitytohandlethingsandletmeknowweshouldberesponsible

　　Idovolunteerserviceinthecommunityregularly,tohelpcleanuptheenvironment.

　　IvoluntarilyenrolledintheschooltodonatebloodWhensophomore.

　　IlikeAmericanmovies,becausetheyhasfunnyplotandstunningmotioneffects.Meanwhile,listeningthemusicandsingingarealsomyintegralpartofmylife,whateverEnglish,ChineseorJapanese.Finally,Readingthenovelsaremyfavorite;bytheauthor'sdescription,Icanimmersiveandlearnmanydifferentexotic.

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　　Mynameis.;

　　IwasborninMainlandChinainXi’an.Ihaveanordinarybuthappyfamily,andmyparentslovemeverymuch.Inthepastdecadeofschooling,Ihavebeenatopstudentinclass.Fromjuniortoseniorhighschool,Ihavereceivedmanyhonorsinvariouswritingcontests,forIreallylikeandactuallyenjoywriting.Thesepreciousexperiencesalsomakemegetmoreconfident.对不起,没时间改下面,最后一段改好了

　　（IalsoperformedverywellinEnglish,andoftengetthefirstinexam.Inmyopinion,myEnglishteacherhashelpedmealotinmyEnglishlearning,theencouragesofhergavemeagreatdealofconfident.Shecananswermyconfusioninthelearningpatiently,andsheoftenlendmetheEnglishmagazineandherfavoritebooks.Throughoutreadingtheseinterestingbooksandmagazines,notonlyletmyEnglishabilitygetsahugeleapandletmelikeEnglishmore,butalsofirmmyconfidencetolearnEnglishbetter.Inhighschoolthreeyears,IservedasChiefofbooks,classrepresentatives,vicesquadandchemistryclassrepresentative.Thesecadresasexperienceshasthoughtmealot,includinghonedmyabilitytohandlethingsandletmeknowweshouldberesponsible

　　Idovolunteerserviceinthecommunityregularly,tohelpcleanuptheenvironment.

　　IvoluntarilyenrolledintheschooltodonatebloodWhensophomore.）

　　Asforhobbies,IlikeAmericanmoviesfortheirfunnyplotsandstunningmotioneffects.Meanwhile,listeningtomusicandsingingarealsoanintegralpartofmylife,nomatterwhetherthelanguageisEnglish,ChineseorJapanese.Finally,Readingnovelsismyfavorite,throughwhichicanknowsomanythingsaboutothercountriesandcultures.