LadiesandGentlemen,
Goodafternoon!I’mLiHua,aged17,asunnyandoutgoingmiddleschoolstudentasyousee.Today,it’smyhonortostandheregivingaspeechwiththetitleof“DreamLightenMyLife”.
EveryoneembracesdifferentdreamstolightenortocontributetothegreatrejuvenationoftheChinesenation.Whenitcomestome,I’vebeendreamingofbecomingadoctorsincechildhood.WhenIseepeoplesufferinganddyingofillnesses,Imadeupmymindtohelpthesickandcurethemoftheirdiseases.Ihopetoseeaworldwherethereisnocancer,noAids,nofataldiseases.
Admittedly,topursueandfulfillmydream,Iwillalwayskeepitinmindsoastotrymosttobeadmittedbyakeymedicaluniversity,thuslearningtheessentialknowledgeandaccumulatingagreatdealofexperience.
Thisismydream,lighteningmylifefarahead.NowIbelieveIhaveonemoresteptoclosetoit,right?
Thankyouforyourlistening!
这是一篇演讲稿:主题是我的中国梦。演讲标题为“DreamLightenMyLife”.首先确定演讲的时态以现在时为主。用第一人称。根据内容要求:先是自我简介,然后说出你的演讲主题。然后陈述你自己的梦想,(这个梦想一定是积极的,有意义的,跟中国梦一致)并且阐明原因。接下来是实现自己梦想的具体做法,对于高三学生来说,至少应该心怀梦想,努力学习,进入理想的大学,为实现梦想做最大的努力。有必要表明自己对于实现自己梦想的信心。最后,表示感谢。
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文中用了许多高级词汇,如:embraces,ighten, contributetothegreatrejuvenation,admittedly,pursue,fulfill,,essential,accumulate等,句型:Whenitcomestome,定语从句:wherethereisnocancer,noAids,nofataldiseases时态:’havebeendreamingof,短语:makeupone’smind,curesb.ofsth.,keepsth.inmind,使文章的表达流畅,自然,积极,健康。