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　　我是个初一的学生,请各位大神看一下我的英语作文有没有错误.Hello,everyone!Doyouknowme?MynameisYuJiale.I’m12andmybirthdayisonAugust23rd.I’maChineseboyandIliveinChongqingwithmyfamily.Doyouwantto

　　我是个初一的学生,请各位大神看一下我的英语作文有没有错误.

　　Hello,everyone!Doyouknowme?MynameisYuJiale.I’m12andmybirthdayisonAugust23rd.I’maChineseboyandIliveinChongqingwithmyfamily.Doyouwanttoknowmyfamily?Now,letmetelltoyouaboutmyfamily.

　　Ihaveasmallfamily.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremygrandmother,myparentsandI.Myparentshasgrayhair.Shealwayscookssomedeliciousfoodtome.Myfatherisanengineer.Heistallandthin.Sometimes,heistoosternbutheisusuallykindtome.Mymotherisahousewifeandshehelpswithmystudy.I’maGrade7studentofNo.8MiddleSchoolandI’mmyparents’onlychild.SotheylovemeandIlovethemverymuch,

　　Thisismyfamily.Ilikeitverymuch.