英语高手们：帮我看看我写的作文中有没有错误这是写一篇学生会通知同学们去爬山的通知Boysandgirls,Iamtellingagoodnews.Toreduceourstudystress,thestudents'uniondecidedtoorganiseanactivity,andwe

　　英语高手们：帮我看看我写的作文中有没有错误

　　这是写一篇学生会通知同学们去爬山的通知

　　Boysandgirls,Iamtellingagoodnews.Toreduceourstudystress,thestudents'uniondecidedtoorganiseanactivity,andwecangototheMountainYao.Well,herearesomeorders.

　　Firstly,pleasearriveatschoolgateat8:00onSaturdaymorning.Doontime,orwewon'twaitforyou.AndouractivitytimeisSaturday8:00a.mto4:00p.m.What's

　　more,makesurebringsomedrinkingsandsothatyouwon'tbeaffectedbyheat.

　　Bringacamera.Somegirlscanwearacapsothatthesunshinewon'theatyou.Finally,youcansingsongsongrassground,andwewillplaygamestogether.

　　Iwishyoucanhaveagreattime!gstudents'union

　　我现在检查了一下,有3处错误

　　1.news为不可数名词,不应用agoodnews,应该为apieceofnews

　　2.第2段第2行应用from...to...的形式,而不能直接在时间后加to

　　3.makesuretodo

　　完了,惨了~