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　　谁能帮我改改这篇作文?要给外国学校看的.收不收我就看这片作文了~尽量改得自然些,Everyonehasanadmirehistoricalfigure?Ialsohave,sheisthepersonIadmiremost,HelenKeller.Ibelieveyouhaveseen(ifgavemethre

　　谁能帮我改改这篇作文?要给外国学校看的.收不收我就看这片作文了~尽量改得自然些,

　　Everyonehasanadmirehistoricalfigure?Ialsohave,sheisthepersonIadmiremost,HelenKeller.Ibelieveyouhaveseen(ifgavemethreedayslight).Thisisthefamousbookwhichmovedthewold,befromtheblindanddeafmutilatedgirlkeller

　　HelenKellerwasborninAmerica,south.Nineteenmonthsold,becauseabadillness,makinghersincethenlosteyesightandhearing.Eight,Helen'smotherforhertofindatutor--AnnemissSullivan,andentertheperkinscopyrightlearning.Atage16,HelenintoHarvardUniversityaffiliatedCambridgecollegeforwomenlearnEnglishhistory,German,Latin,mathematicsandmanyliteraryclassics.Fouryearsafterthat,shegoesintoHarvardUniversity,begantotrywriting.Aftergraduationfromtheuniversity,Helenheartconcentratedinpushingtheblindcarethesocialmovement,suchaspublishingblindjournals,establishedsecurityblindcellcommittee,makingtheblindbysocietyheartfinallyvalue.In1959,theUnitedNationsgeneralassembly,thedelegatesconsistentpraisehercontributiontohuman.In1968,HelenKellercalmgothroughherhardandfullofglory.

　　Adeafandblindcanhavemadesogreatachievement,howamazingandadmiration.IfHelensuccumbtounfortunatefate,so,shewillbecomeapoorandfoolishdodger.Butshedidn'theadtofate,shewithamazingperseverance,indomitablespirit,walkedthewayoflife,andforthehumanmakeagreatcontribution,becomeaknowledgeableandrespectable.Helen'slife,isnoordinary.Shegavepeopleagreatencouragement,sothatthosewhoidlingpeopleveryregret.Sheisthekindofindomitableperseverance,makemeforever,thatitisIadmireherreason

　　尽量写得和中国高中水平差不多.

　　我也有,她就是我最敬佩的人,海伦凯勒.相信大家都看过（假如给我三天光明）.这个惊动世界的文学巨作,就是出自那个双目失明,双耳失聪的残废女孩海伦凯勒

　　海伦?凯勒出生在美国南部.十九个月大时,因为一场大病,使得她从此失去了视力及听力.八岁时,海伦的母亲为她找到了一位家庭教师——安妮苏利文小姐,并进入帕金斯盲校学习.十六岁时,海伦进入哈佛大学附属剑桥女子学院学习英文史,德文,拉丁文,数学及许多文学名著.四年后,她如愿进入哈佛大学,开始尝试写作.大学毕业后,海伦把心力集中在推行盲人关怀的社会运动上,诸如出版盲人刊物,成立保障盲胞的委员会,使得盲人的心声终于受到社会的重视.一九五九年,在联合国大会中,各国代表一致称赞她对人类的贡献.一九六八年,海伦凯勒平静的走完她艰辛又充满荣耀.

　　一个盲聋人能取得这么大的成就,是何等的令人惊讶和钦佩.如果海伦屈服于不幸的命运,那么,她将成为一个可怜而又愚昧的寄生者.然而她并没有向命运低头,她以惊人的毅力,顽强的精神,走完了人生的道路,并为人类作出了伟大的贡献,

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　　Everyonehashistoricalfigureadmired.Ialsohaveone,whoisthepersonIadmiremost,HelenKeller.Ibelieveyouhaveseenthearticleifgavemethreedayslight.Thisisthefamousbookwhichmovedthewold,writenbytheblindanddeafgirlKeller.

　　HelenKellerwasborninSouthernAmerica.19monthsaftershewasborn,becauseofaseriousillness,shelosthereyesightandhearing.Attheageof8,Helen'smotherfoundatutor--AnnemissSullivanforher,andenterthePerkinstostudy.Atage16,HelenenteredintoHarvardUniversityaffiliatedCambridgecollegeforwomenlearnEnglishhistory,German,Latin,mathematicsandmanyliteraryclassics.Fouryearsafterthat,shegoesintoHarvardUniversity,begantowrite.Aftergraduationfromtheuniversity,Helenconcentratedonpushingtheblindcaremovement,suchaspublishingblindjournals,establishingsecurityblindcellcommittee.Andshefinallymadethebindpeoplesvoicebeheard.In1959,attheUnitedNationsgeneralassembly,thedelegatesconsistentlypraisedhercontributiontohuman.In1968,HelenKellercalmlywentthroughherlifehardandfullofglory.

　　Adeafandblindwomencouldhavemadesogreatachievements,It'samazingandworthadmiring.IfHelensubmittedtounfortunatefate,shemightbecomeapoorandfoolishlodger.Butshedidn'tbendtofate,shewithamazingperseveranceandindomitablespirit,walkedonthewayoflife,andmadeagreatcontributiontothehuman.Shebecomeaknowledgeableandrespectablewoman.Helen'slifewasnotordinary.Sheinspiredthefailedpeopleandmadepeopleidolingfeelregret.Sheperseverancemovedme,thatitisthereasonwhyIadmireher.