【改语法错误Tobeanengineer,youneedtobeprecise,knowledgeable,andsometimescreative.Asastudent,IhaveconfidenceonmyprecisenessandattentivenessbecausecarelessnessisrarelythereasonthatIlosemarkduringexams.Idon’tdoubtmy】

　　改语法错误

　　Tobeanengineer,youneedtobeprecise,knowledgeable,andsometimescreative.Asastudent,IhaveconfidenceonmyprecisenessandattentivenessbecausecarelessnessisrarelythereasonthatIlosemarkduringexams.Idon’tdoubtmyabilityonmanagementandleadershipaswell,butsinceIspendmosttimewithmoreintelligentstudents;Itendplayasupportiveroleratherthanbeingaleadermyselfinmostcases.However,Icanjudgeothersideasandsometimesmakeupbetterideasbycombiningthestrengthsofother’sthoughts.Youcanusemethodicaltodescribeme,maybealittleconservativeaswell.Unlikemostenergetichighschoolstudents,Iliketohavemoreprivacyinsteadoffillingupmyscheduleswithvarioussocialactivities.Asaresult,IcanconcentratebetteronschoolworkthanmoststudentssinceIhavelessactivitiestospendefforton.Forcreativity,Iwon’tspendtimeonattemptingtocreatesomethingunlessaspecificpurposehasbeenclarified.However,ifIdotrytocreative,Iwillputmybestabilityinit.Anyway,IhaveconfidenceonbeinganengineerinthefieldwhichIaminterestin.

　　大学工程系申请,问你会是什么样的engineer,请各位大侠帮看看语法,尤其注意介词,如果有词不准确,或者哪里听起来不好请指出来,

　　视改的好坏加悬赏分.