Mydream(ByKaiser3344)Iamanordinaryperson,Ihaveanordinarydream:Isadoctor.Becausedoctormaylettheseexperiencepersonallythehumanwhichtheindispositionsufferstogetridoft...

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　　mydreamWhenIwasalittlegirl,Ihadadreamtobeafamouswriter.IrememberedthatImadeabigdecisiontorealizemydreamthatIstartedmyfirstwritingofanovel.Iwasaskinnylittleschool-girlwithglasseswhodreamtupcharacterswithqualitiesIlongedtoembody–theywereprettyandpowerfulandlivedlivesfullofintrigueanddrama.AfterIfinishedhighschool,althoughthatstorylikemostofmywritingsendedupunfinishedandstayedinthebottomofmydeskdrawers,IenjoyedandmadefunofmywritingswhenIreadthemlater.NowIamacollegestudentmajoredinengineeringwhostudiesscienceandmatheveryday.Inthemeantime,Iamtryingtobringmyfirstbooktoanend.Ihavebeenalwaysthinkingwhywecouldn’ttakeourdreamsintoourownhands.Iwouldencourageeverybodytofindwaystolivetheirdreams,whetheronasmallscale–likemywritingofanovel–orabiggerscale,likegoingafterajobwehavealwayswanted.Iamlivingwithpartofmylittlepassion,inmyownway.原来楼主要多的，这篇字数应该够了，多多支持！

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　　Kaiser3344:Iamanordinaryperson,Ihaveanordinarydream:Isadoctor.Becausedoctormaylettheseexperiencepersonallythehumanwhichtheindispositionsufferstogetridofthepain.Adoctormustbeprofessionallytrainedandmuststricklyfollowtheoccupationalrules.Whenheworks,heshouldascarefullyaspossibleandtreathispatientpatiently.Whenhefindssomethingabnormal,heshouldreactquickly.Ifthereissomethinghedon'tunderstand,hecanaskotherexpertshumblyandimprovehisknowledgeaccordingly.Thatiswhatadoctorshoulddoperfectly。Mayletthehumanchangethehealth.Atthesametime,Ibelievedthat,willhelpothers,ownalsotobeabletoobtainjoyfully.Therefore,IhopedfutureImightbeadoctor.补充部分翻译：当一个医生,必须是受过专业训练的,必须严格遵守职业规则。当他的作品,他应该一样认真对待他的病人可能的,耐心的人。当他发现有异常,他应该快速的反应力。如果有某件事时,他不明白,他可以要求其他专家谦逊地提高自己的知识进行相应的调整。这是一个医生应该做到完美。楼主可根据需要自行删减，不影响行文！！！