高手帮我批改一下这篇英语作文帮我看看这篇作文,给我些具体的意见,OnedayIwasabouttogooutsidetoplaywhenIsawmymotherbeingbusywithseveralhouseworkatthesametime.Shelookedsotired,andIfeltguilty,There

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　　OnedayIwasabouttogooutsidetoplaywhenIsawmymotherbeingbusywithseveralhouseworkatthesametime.Shelookedsotired,andIfeltguilty,ThereforeImadeadeterminationtosharehouseworkwithher.Iwasabouttowashtheclotheswhenmyfriendcalledmeupandaskedmetoplaywithher.ItoldherthatIwouldgoontheconditionthatcompletingmywashing.ThenIgoonwashing,OnlythendidIrealizeditwassuchatiringthingtowashclothes,andhowtiredmymotherwas.Whilemymothernotonlyworkedoutsidebutalsotooktheresponsibilityofourhouseworkinside,shenevercomplainttous.AfterwashingIfelttiredthough,mymotherpraisedme,andsaidthatIwasagoodchild.Ifelthappy.