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  初中英语作文,总考不好,Onesunnyafternoon,wehadaPElesson.Wegatheredontheplayground.Theteachertoldusthatwewouldlearnthelongjump.Ibegantofeelnervousbeacasuelwasafraidoffalling.Firstteachershowedushowtojump

  初中英语作文,总考不好,

  Onesunnyafternoon,wehadaPElesson.Wegatheredontheplayground.Theteachertoldusthatwewouldlearnthelongjump.Ibegantofeelnervousbeacasuelwasafraidoffalling.Firstteachershowedushowtojumpbetterandlonger.Thenwewereaskedtobeready.Afteramoment,itturnedtome.llookedatthewayandtriedmyfirsttime.Unfortunately,lfailedandfelldown.Myfriendandtheteacherencouragedme.lfeltpowerfulagain,andtriedagain.Atlast,ljumpedover3meters!lwassohappythatlcouldn'tsayaword.Yes,lsucceeded!Asthesayinggoes,'Practisemakestheperfect!'

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2020-04-1415:28
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黄大海

  .楼上的那个完全是改错了==人家时态好好的.

  第二行,beacasue,应该是because

  第三行,对的,first改firstly+“,”会比较好;然后应该jumpbetterandfarther,不是longer.

  wewereaskedtobeready==.这里有一个准备的过程,beready十分生硬.改getready.

  !后面,itwasmyturn.轮到我了.没有itturnedtome这种说法.

  .后面一句.Ilookedatthepathway(更具象一点,通路而不要泛指“路”)andhadmyfirsttry.

  Practicemakesperfect.没有the

  然后初中作文的话这样改就可以了,要求没必要更高了.

2020-04-14 15:30:41
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