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　　【短文改错greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinthewaypeoplecommunicatewitheachotherformalongdistance.inthepast,peoplewritrlatterstoexchangeinformationswitheachother.lateron,theycouldtalkwitheachotheronthefixingtelepho】

　　短文改错greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinthewaypeoplecommunicatewitheachother

　　formalongdistance.inthepast,peoplewritrlatterstoexchangeinformationswitheachother.lateron,theycouldtalkwitheachotheronthefixingtelephone.nowmoreandmorepeopleuseourownmobilephonestocommunicateandinsteadwritingonpaper,theye-maileachotherthroughtheinternet.underthehelpofthe3gtechnology,someeventalktoface.asaresult,peoplefindthatquickerandeasiertocommunicate,oratthesametimesomepeoplefeelthattheybecomepoorerinwriting.andtherelationshipbetweeneachnotherisnotsocloserasbefore

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　　greatchangeshave(去掉been)takenplaceinthewaypeoplecommunicatewitheachotherfromalongdistance.inthepast,people(wrote)letterstoexchange(information)witheachother.lateron,theycouldtalkwitheachotheronthe(fixed)telephone.nowmoreandmorepeopleuse(their)ownmobilephonestocommunicateandinstead(加入of)writingonpaper,theye-maileachotherthroughtheinternet.(With)thehelpofthe3gtechnology,someeventalk(加入face)toface.asaresult,peoplefind(it)quickerandeasiertocommunicate,(But)atthesametimesomepeoplefeelthattheybecomepoorerinwriting.andtherelationshipbetweeneachotherisnotso(close)asbefore.