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  【WeshouldsaynotocanteenGoodmorning,classmatesandclassmates,todaymyspeechisaboutcanteen.Recently,theinformationsaboutcanteenmayhavealreadybeenheardmanytimes,maybeinthenewspaper,maybeontheTV,evenonthetopofyourphone.Cantee】

  Weshouldsaynotocanteen

  Goodmorning,classmatesandclassmates,todaymyspeechisaboutcanteen.

  Recently,theinformationsaboutcanteenmayhavealreadybeenheardmanytimes,maybeinthenewspaper,maybeontheTV,evenonthetopofyourphone.Canteeniscloselyrelatedtoourlife,thereisanoldsaying,”breadisthestalloflife.”Butwhat’sthis?Areyoukiddingme?Isthisaironinmylunch?It’sverykindofyoutoaddironforfreetoimproveournutrition.We’reverydisappointedwiththepoorqualityofthefood.Manydishestastebadlyandvegetablesareoftenovercooked.Somestudentsatea…fromthemeal,what’smore,canyouimagineaflyflowonyoursoup?Andthepriceofthefoodissurprisinglyhigh.Ifwehavethreemealsinthecanteen,twentyorthirtyYuanisgone.Icouldn’tstandanymore,touchyourpocket,askyourselfhowmuchmoneydoyouhave?Besidesdon’t’tellmethatI’mgoingtomarket,whenIenterthecanteen,it’susuallyverycrowded.Asthenumberofstudentsiseverincreasing,thereisnotenoughspaceandseatstoallowustohaveourmealsthere,it’sveryfunnyforustofindaseatlikehungrylion?No,weneedsayno.canweseethecanteenrampant?Wecouldn’tturnablindeyetoit,weshouldagainstthemtowinourright,nowwemusttakesomemeasurestowinthisbattle!

  Thankyou!

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2020-04-1112:27
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杜慧勇

  先改一段供参考.WeshouldsaynotocanteenGoodmorning,teacheresandclassmates!Myspeechtodayisaboutcanteen.Recently,theinformationaboutcanteenmayhavealreadybeenheardquiteoften,youm...

2020-04-11 12:28:31
杜慧勇

  如果满意,再改后面部分。

2020-04-11 12:32:58
杜慧勇

  请注意,information、iron都是不可数名词。

2020-04-11 12:35:00
黄炯

  改的不错,改完必好评!!!可以追加分数!!

2020-04-11 12:37:07
杜慧勇

  第二部分,最后一部分马上贴。

  We’reallverydisappointedwiththepoorqualityofthefood.Manydishestastebadlyandvegetablesareoftenovercooked.Somestudentsevenfoundxxxfromtheirmeal!What’smore,canyouimagineaflyflyingonyoursoup?Andthepriceofthefoodissurprisinglyhigh.Ifyouhavethreemealsinthecanteen,youwouldpaytwentyorthirtyYuan!Icouldn’tstandanymoretotouchyourpocket,andaskyourselfhowmuchmoneyyouhave.Besides,youmaytellmethatI’mgoingtomarket.However,whenyouenterthecanteen,youwillfindit’susuallyverycrowded.

2020-04-11 12:37:42
杜慧勇

  最后一部分。

  Asthenumberofstudentsiseverincreasing,thereisnotenoughspaceandseatstoallowustohaveourmealsthere,it’sveryluckyforanyonetofindaseat!Somewhatlikeahungryhuntinglion.No,weneedtosayno!Wehavetosayno!Canweseethecanteenrampant?Wecouldn’tturnablindeyetoit,weshouldbeagainstthemtowinourright.Wemusttakesomemeasurestostruggleandwin!

  Thankyou!

  (此处用Battle太强烈了。)

2020-04-11 12:40:45
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