写作佳句及惯用表达】?

　　1.Wealthandhealtharewhateverybodylongsfor.财富和健康是每个人渴望得到的.

　　2.Nooneknowsthevalueofhealthuntilhelosesit.直到有病才知道健康的宝贵.

　　3.Ifyoubecomesick,itisnearlyimpossibletopursueyourcareereffectively,muchlessmakeyourdreamscometrue.如果病了,有效地干事业几乎就不可能,更不用说使你梦想成真了.

　　4.Whenrichesincrease,thebodydecreases.(prov.)终生只恨积蓄少,待到多时眼闭了.

　　5.Somepeoplehaveonlyonelifelongobjective—togainwealthevenatthecostoftheirhealth.有些人一生只有一个目标——获取财富,甚至不惜身体健康.

　　6.Healthiswealth.(prov.)健康就是财富?

　　7.Healthisbetterthanwealth.(prov.)健康胜于财富.

　　8.Wealthisnothingwithouthealth.(prov.)失去健康,空有家当.

　　9.Healthandwealthcreatebeauty.(prov.)健康和财富创造美.

　　10.Hewhohashealthhashope,andhewhohashopehaseverything.(prov.)有健康即有希望,有希望即有一切.

　　【写作范文】?

　　Somepeoplebelievethatwealthcanbringeverything.Andsomepeoplethinkthat

　　healthisabovewealth.Whatisyouropinionaboutit?

　　Writeacompositionofabout150wordsonthefollowingtopic:

　　WealthandHealth?

　　Wealthandhealtharewhateverybodylongsfor.Somebelievewealthmeanseverything,thinkingthatwithmoneytheycangetwhatevertheylike.Inordertomakemoney,theyarewillingtodoanythinghard,humble,harmful,orevenillegal.Buttheresultsusuallyturnouttheoppositeastheyexpected.

　　Ithinkhealthismoreimportantthanwealth.Healthislikethebaseofabuilding.Withoutgoodhealth,onecannotenjoythepleasurebroughtbywealth.Asaproverbgoes,“Healthisabovewealth.”Itistruethatoneshouldbehealthyfirstofall.Ifyouaresufferingfromsomedisease,canyouworkenergeticallyinyourcareer?Moneycannotbuyhealth,butwithgoodhealth,youcanworkhardtoearnmoremoney.

　　Therefore,youmustkeephealthybeforeyoubecomewealthy.Inordertobehealthy,youshoulddevelopagoodlivinghabitanddophysicalexerciseregularly.Remembertheproverb“Healthisnotvalueduntilsicknesscomes.”

　　【学习要点】?

　　①longfor渴望得到?

　　②Buttheresultsusuallyturnouttheoppositeastheyexpected.结果往往事与愿违.

　　③sufferfrom受…之苦,因…而不舒服；患（某种疾病）

　　【要点提示】?

　　⑴本文通过对比方法对“健康与财富”加以议论.文章首先举出认为财富更重要的观点,并举出事实说明受这种观念支配下的不良结果.然后作者引出与之对立观点：健康比财富更重要,接着用了六个扩展句作为论据,证明论点：健康比财富更重要.第一个论据是比喻.比喻是运用人们较熟悉而又容易?理解的具体事物,来论证人们较生疏、难懂的道理.把健康比做建筑物的基础,就把抽象的健康与具体的建筑物联系起来,从而使读者轻易理解健康与财富的关系.人们不难想象没有健康如同建筑物没有基础一样.扩展句⑥说明二者的关系.作者还用一格言作论据,因格言是人们总结的经验.文章结尾用一格言,告诫人们不要等得了病才珍惜健康.文章论证用词简洁,句子结构简单,表达清楚.

　　⑵关联词：But（表示对比）,Firstofall（首先）,Therefore（表示结论：因此）,Inorderto（为了）.

　　【模拟训练】?〔35MIN.

　　Nowadaysmanypeoplemeasuresuccessbymoney.Whatisyouropinionaboutthis?

　　Writeacompositionofabout150wordsonthefollowingtopic:

　　CanSuccessbeMeasuredinTermsofMoneyAlone

　　Youaretowriteinthreeparagraphs.

　　Inthefirstparagraph,stateyourattitude.

　　Inthesecondparagraph,stateyourreasonsforyourview.

　　Inthelastparagraph,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusion.