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　　请大神帮忙修正这篇作文中的语法错误Iagreewiththat“peopleintheirrightmindnevertakeprideintheirtalents.”Becauseifamanbecomingproud,hewillattainlessachievementthenheshouldbe.Thefablesinordertotellpeo

　　请大神帮忙修正这篇作文中的语法错误

　　Iagreewiththat“peopleintheirrightmindnevertakeprideintheirtalents.”Becauseifamanbecomingproud,hewillattainlessachievementthenheshouldbe.Thefablesinordertotellpeopleitiswrongtobecomeproudexistinallculture.Thisisageneralideathatpeopleshouldnottakeprideeventhoughtheyreallyhavesometalents.

　　InancientChina,therewasachildwhowascalledgeniusbyallothercitizens,forheisabletowritepoetrywhenhewasjust7yearsold.Hisfatherwasreallyprideofhisson,andtakeshimalloverthecountrytoshowhistalent,itmakesthechilddonotwanttocontinuestudyatall.Hisnameinthehistorywasjusta“geniusboy”,nothingrecordedabouthimafterhewas12yearsold.InChinesehistory,therearehundredsofgeniusboyrecorded,butonlyafewofthemgotsomerealachievementinpolitic,literatureorscience.Theonlythingsofthemrecordedinthehistorybookwerejustthestoryabouttheirchildhood.

　　Theotherreasonwhypeopleshouldnottakeprideoftheirtalentisthepridewillmakethemlookdownonothers.Itisnodoubtthattojealousmenwhohavebetterlifeortalentisakindofhumannature.Somegeniuswerepersecutebyotherseventherewasnorecordedoftheydidnotrespectthem.Soifthegeniustakeprideandcontemptuousothers,theyaremorelikelytobetreatedbadly,orevenothersjustrefusetohelphim,fewthingscanbedonewithonlyonegenius.

　　Tokeepmodestdoesnotmeantohavefewconfidences;amanwhodoesnotbelievehimselfwillalsohavenothingseriousdone,selfconfidenceisasimportantasmodest.Thehardthingistofindthebalancebetweenenoughconfidencesandproud,geniusneedtobecarefuldidn’tgettoomuchineachside.

　　Tobeconcluded,Peopleintheirrightmindnevertakeprideintheirtalentsisatruth;onlybyobeyingthisrulecanthegeniuskeeptheirtalentandsuccessinlife.Thisisalsoforparents,thattheyshouldnotmaketheirgeniuschildrenbecomeproud,forexample,byflaunttheirtalentstoallfriends,itwillthechildlookdownotherchildren.

　　如果我能成功加分到A以上（现在是B）,

　　问了几个老外..我还是选雪水飘飘同学的了..zhangxuyang抱歉了.....

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　　Iagree【withthestatementthat】“peopleintheirrightmindnevertakeprideintheirtalents,”【becauseifamanbecomestooproud,hewillachievelessthanwhathecouldhaveachieved.】【Thiskindofaphorismwarning】people【aboutbecomingtooproudexists】inall【cultures】.【There】isageneralideathatpeopleshouldnottake【toomuchprideintheirsuccess】eventhoughthey【mightactually】havesometalents.

　　InancientChina,there【once】wasachildwhowas【named】geniusbyall【the】othercitizens,【becausehecould】writepoetry【attheageofseven】.Hisfatherwasreally【proud】ofhisson,and【took】himalloverthecountrytoshow【others】histalent.【However,becauseofthis,】thechild【didnot】wanttocontinue【hisstudiesanylonger】.Hisnameinthehistorybooksissimply】“geniusboy”,【andnothingwasever】recordedabouthimafterhewas12yearsold.InChinesehistory,【hundredsoftalentedboyswerenoted】,butonlyafewofthem【achievedsuccess】in【politics,literature,orscience.】【Formostofthem,】theonlythingsofthemrecordedinthehistorybookwere【stories】abouttheir【childhoods】.

　　Theotherreasonwhypeopleshouldnottake【toomuchpridein】their【talentsandsuccesses】is【that】pridewillmakethem【morelikelyto】lookdownonothers.【Tobejealousofmenwholeadabetterlifeorhavemoretalentis】humannature.【Throughouthistory,therewereoftengeniuseswho】were【persecuted】byotherseven【though】therewasno【record】of【therehavingbeenpeople】whodidnotrespectthem.【Theconclusionisthatif】thegeniustake【toomuchprideintheirtalents】and【treatsotherswithcontempt,】they【are】morelikelytobetreatedbadly,【andothersmightrefusetohelphim.】Fewthingscanbedonewithonlyonegenius.

　　To【be】modestdoesnot【necessarilymeanonemusthavelowself-confidence】;amanwhodoesnot【believein】himselfwillnotbeableto【accomplishanythinggreat,as】selfconfidenceis【just】asimportantas【modesty】.Thehardthingistofindthebalancebetweenenoughconfidencesandproud,geniusneedtobecarefuldidn’tgettoomuchineachside.

　　文章改了一半,我有点事情,待会儿回来继续改：）你先看看吧,