来英语高手急,帮忙把几段文章里的语法等错误给改正下,TheCommonPointsSharedbyBothThecommonpointssharedbyValentine’sDayandDouble-SeventhDayisthatbothofthemarecelebratedaslover’sday,inwhichpeoplewillg

　　来英语高手急,帮忙把几段文章里的语法等错误给改正下,

　　TheCommonPointsSharedbyBoth

　　ThecommonpointssharedbyValentine’sDayandDouble-SeventhDayisthatbothofthemarecelebratedaslover’sday,inwhichpeoplewillgivegiftssuchascandy,roses,andchocolatestothepeopletheyliketoday,manypeopletodayevenchosethisdaytomakeaproposalfortheirloveandmarriageduringthesetwodays.

　　Bothofthemaretraditionalfestivalsandhavebeencelebratedforseveralthousandyears,especiallytodayinthishighlydevelopedworld,bothofthemhavebeeninternationalizedandareacceptedbymanypeoplefromdifferentcountryandculture.

　　AfterweknowclearlyabouttheoriginoftheChina’sDouble-seventhDayandValentine’sDay,differencesappearinmanyaspectssuchasoriginalsocietybackground,people’swayofthinking,andevensomeessentialones.China’sdouble-seventhdayandValentine’sDayaredifferentinmanyaspectsfrompasttopretence,andalsointhewayoftheircelebratingandthecustomofthefestival.

　　First,thosetwofestivalsaredifferentfromtheirorigins.China’sDouble-sevenDaywasoriginatedinChina’sagriculturalsocietyinwhichalltheinformationofthefestivalswasaboutChina’scountrylifeincludingtheoldox,thewaytofindawifeandtheweavingmaid,thework,andthedetailsofthestorydevelopments.whichmeansallthethingshappeninthattimewhenchinapeoplewasverybelieveinnaturalheaven.Thisisdifferentfromthewestvalentine’sday,whichwasoriginatedduringthetimewhenpeoplearedeepingrainedinbuiltgodandJesusChristintheirmind.Asweallknowthatchina’sgodwasdifferentfromwesterngods

　　Thewayofcelebratingthosetwofestivalsaredifferent.Inoldchina,inthestory,thisdaywassentbythegodtolettheweavingmaidandthecowherdtogettogetherandseeeachotheronceayear.Thestorywastragedy.Sothemeaningpeoplecelebratingthisdaywastoblessthecouple.What’smore,everyyearinSeventhJuly,mostlyitwillrain,solegendgothattherainonthatdaywasthetearsofthecoupleswhomisseachotherandhaven’tseenforayear.Peopleinthisdayblessthecoupletostaytogetherforever,atthesametimetheypreythemselvestohavesomeonetomissandloveandwait.Becausetheweavingmaidinthes